Industrial sounding.
The melody is quite simple. It's not a bad thing, but... the drum line is too simple for that matter. Also, it does seem static as you say, and it doesn't distract as much as you probably think it would. There's actually a song from LoudCore called "Tortured Chamber" that's industrial. Look that up and give a listen, it's quite an awesome song to get inspiration from. :P Definitely a good try on this one though. Because I wouldn't know where to start with industrial. Just keep practicing! :D