Wow... brilliant!
Very good. I like the emotion going on here! :) Very strong emotion coming off the melody and sounds. Sounds very sad, yet happy at the same time. I would say it's one of my favorites from you. Especially since it has higher quality sounds in it. Keep making more songs with piano. You'll become a great known person someday if you focus on this. And BTW... check out my new song demo. :) I hope you like it. :D
Yay! Imma check it out later anyways o.e
Hey... I'm thinking on adding trumpet at the end of this... to make it more... "Epic" like heartless says :P, what do you think? Pm me if you read that... I wanna perfect it even when FL and the time will make it imposible Ó_Ò.
~Bru =D
More complex.
I like it actually. It sounds more complex than your other songs. It's much improvement over your other songs. It's worth submitting anything if it's a song or loop. Not bad of a submission really. Don't bother with the guy below. He's probably an ass and doesn't like the genre of this song.
Heh, thanks man. I agree with you completely! And thanks for your on going support - you're really awesome!
Slick, dark tone.
I enjoy this song a lot. It's got a lot of work put into it. I notice the transition from the left to the right of the speakers [using headphones for this one]. Sounds very cool like that. It does have a sense of a darkness. I never got to really listen to the first version of the song, as you have edited the song. It does have the repetition in it, but has variation to keep it from drawing out completely. I think my favorite sound in the song has to be that of a "roaring" monster-type sound? It happens every so often in the song, where it fades from the right to the left. And the ending... sounds great as it is, but kind of begs for more. For an even more epic ending, I probably would have added some type of heavy bass "boom!", ya know? But hey... it's an opinion, right? :P Good job I would say. Definitely a lot of work was put into it. But... I still consider Crystalline Ambience to be better. :D Probably because of the ambience invloved. Lol. Good job anyways. Oh! And I really couldn't visualize a scene with this song. Strange... Hmm. Lol.
Heeyy! Thanks man XD I worked pretty hard on this one. True... I could've done more with the ending... but I like it as it is. If you want the original I could give you the mp3 lol. Heeehh. Crystalline Ambience eh? X3 I spose. Lol... more like a.... 'creepy scream/yell' rather than a roar X3 Aww... no visualization... but dats cool. Glad you liked it =3 Keep it real
~[IZK]
Ahh, yes. Very magical.
I like this little demo you have. The drumming is a bit too low. I would definitely keep the drums to a minimum tho. Keep at this. It's definitely one of the better. Good job!
^_^ Thanks...
They are not at minimun but I just wanted to put a bit of drums to just help the melodie, sadly my computer lags on when i'm editing it with a previev on FL Studio so I cannot hear clean what I'm making T_T.
Imma hate the money D'X.
Thanks for the coments =).
~Bru2712.
Edit: By the way I'm waiting for a new song to come from you ^^.
The best you've got.
I've listened roughly to a lot of your upbeat songs, and I have to admit this has to be the best one. Sound wise, and craziness also. I love the weirdness in it. Does sound industrial in it's own sense. VERY factory-like. Gives me inspiration to do some type of upbeat tune. Adding this to favorites. I hope the best for you in the future!
Thanks
Good start.
I can definitely tell it's only a demo for the song. Not bad of a start. I think the pacing is a little bit slow... and it seems that every verse it has a 1 second stop. Then it adds another rhythm into it. Not sure if you know what I mean, or if it was meant to be that way... but it kind of distorts the rhythm itself for the song. Nice job all around though. Keep it going and more practicing!
Yeah, i put it in weird timing - because it just sounded better that way (the orginal melody did anyway). And then I couldn't put anything else to it with relative ease. On my newer version i've tried to even out the timings - that's difficult aswell btw :P
As far as the gradual increase in thickness of the music - I can't think of any other way! I'm still very newb :D
But anyway, thanks a lot for your review, and I'm glad I can count on someone to give me positive feedback on most things I make. :D
Love the beginning sound. :D
I like this one a lot. It's clear and the melody isn't distorted. Nice job. :)
Thanks =).
If you wanna know, the first beginning song is "Square purity" :).
Glad you like it, thanks for the coments :).
Bru.
Strange. But cool.
I like the sounds you have in here. Does sound somewhat outer-spacey. Lol. Cool with the music. Keep the music coming!
Thanks, I was thinking on the music I hear when somebody gets maried to the first pattern, obviously it isn't the same, I don't wanna use patters of other's lol.
Thanks for the coments :).
~Bru2712.
Nice! :D
Wow... much improved! This is a slick melody. It's emotional and moving. You really should listen to your old songs compared to this one. MUCH improvement! A little short, but still great. I like the hi-hat you used in the song. Very good job!
Woooooow, a ten! X3333333333.
Thanks you :3.
The hat is from the template: "Genres - Hip Hop" lol X3 I love this template, cause good hats are missing T_T.
Thank you :).
~Bru2712.
Nice work there. :)
I love that crystal-type sound you have in the song. Really, there doesn't seem to be anything out of place in my opinion. It's basically like a glitchy song, but not as much as the others. I like the melody in this one... it's a bit slower than your others, which gives a break from the usually faster upbeat tunes you have. One of the cool effects I notice you put was that of the lower bass pitch to the higher bass pitch with the fading. You know what I mean? That's something that was probably difficult to do. I think what could make the song better is the ending. It kind of ended with just a fade-out. Just my opinion, maybe you could hit it with a BAM type of thing. Where towards the end it would sound soft, then the sound would build up and end with a heavy bass drum. Just a thought. Although the ending to this was fine, since it is a calmer song than your others. Good job on it! I wish I had more time for making music. :( With all the time doing work and being with girlfriend, bills, whatever, but I'm gonna try to work whenever on my music. You inspire me to do more, heh. Keep it coming bro!
Heeeyyy, crimson! I love that sound the most, and most of the effects as well. Well, I wanted it to be ambience like, with a side of a bit of excitement, you know? Did I really do that effect? I think it came out on it's own.... an awesome mistake I guess XD Oh, I did the ending for ya there. A little bang, lol. Thanks! Aww... keep trying to fit in some time! I try my hardest to do so ;) XD Thanks for considering me as your inspiration. I SHALL CONTINUE!! =D Keep it real, man~
~[IZK]
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