Pleasant To Hear.
It's quite nice. I like the beginning transition from where you hear the "voice" into the first verse. I like a lot of the noises you have included. My only gripe is that of the drums in the second to last verse. It didn't quite fit well for some reason. Maybe adding a little fade to the drums would do well. Or a softer sounding drum. I do like the other drums included though and especially the deep bass drum [or maybe it's a "strings" noise]. Anyways, it's a very likable track. I have to add to Favorites as well as adding you to my list. I'm curious to see what's in store from you. Also, I notice this is a work in progress. Quite good indeed. Nice work! :)
P.S. Putting in my two cents... I think for the ending you had a long fade of soft sounds. BTW, this reminds me of how Phil Collins music would sound. If you haven't heard of him before, I suggest looking up some songs from him. The style of this song match very well with that. :D